Not bad but with a few insightful notes/suggestions then this thing coulda been even better. You did good working without your tripod in the tense moments. And you got good video here and there during the day...but you're missing one key element to help tie all this together in one...and that's transition shots to help you move from location to location or to help get for day to night. Finding a way to go outside inside and using nat pops will get you to the church element....getting a sunset shot or sun dipping behind a building or or even a timelapse type shot will get you daytime to nighttime. Adding those kinds of things will really help a piece like this out. So you as the photog need to get those things and use them effectively in the edit bay. Practice in your GA stories...use natsound to go inside/ouitside or to change location and you'll start to get the hang of it and it'll become second nature to find those elements. Nice work.