I liked what you did here. You made something out of nothing but that might be a problem, making something out of nothing. I see the jump cut but really that's not as distracting as the nats in this piece. The nat's seemed forced to me. You were trying to make up for the fact that the fire was out by the time you arrived. It seems that you cut the reporters track to insert nats?? That's the forced part. The pauses in the track didn't seem natural and that's distracting. Also the fire was out, not sure how long but what was the sense of urgency. With the quick cuts mixed with nats one would think that the firefighters were rushing to pull someone from the top floor. I know we all want to showcase our talent and spice up a dull story but we sometimes forget why we are there. To basically document what was actually happening.
Please do not take my criticism personally, this business is so subjective that you can't please everybody. I will say I watch some of the stuff that you post and it clearly shows you have talent in your shooting and editing. Keep up the good work and grab some of the knowledge on this board.